kto bedzie dobry i mi pomoze ? :D

[pepek]

taki problem ... w sumie nie problem ale prozba :) Kto przyczai czy to ma sens i czy gramatcznie jest ok i dopisze jeszcze gdzies z 2 zdania tak zeby bylo ok 150 slowek :) Dziekuje bardzo ... odrobie w polu :k0573k:


$10 Million Winner is looking for a wife


When Mark K. was a child he was very shy ,now when he win 10 million dollars he is looking for a wife. He never had been having a girlfriend ,but now he want to get married and Mark place an advertisements for a marriage partner in our newspaper. He don’t know what he must to do when he make a date with girl ,nobody say about married. Mark is very nice men ,but inexperienced and he ask our newspaper for help. Well ,if some nice free woman now is reading this announcement and looking for a men ,Mark willingly make a date.

[sabinka]

yyy... jak dla mnie to to ma skopana gramatyke :11: :11: :11:
ale nie bede poprawiac bo nie zrobie na 100% dobrze :7:

[pepek]

yyy... jak dla mnie to to ma skopana gramatyke :11: :11: :11:
ale nie bede poprawiac bo nie zrobie na 100% dobrze :7:

hehe ja tam nie wim jest 1 w nocy i nie kontaktuje do konca wiec nie wim :50: hehe i dlatego wole sie zapyac niz mi ma to pani sprawdzic i ocenic :92:

[70m3k]

$10 Million Winner is looking for a wife


When Mark K. was a child he was very shy, but now when he won 10 million dollars, he is looking for a wife. He never had a girlfriend ,but now he wants to get married, so Mark placed an advertisement for a marriage partner in our newspaper. He doesn't know what he has to do when he makes a date with a girl ,nobody say(?) about getting married. Mark is a very nice ,but inexperienced man, so he asked our newspaper for help. Well ,if some nice free woman is now reading this announcement and she is looking for a man ,Mark shall willingly make a date.




tyle co do poprawek :D

[ Dodano: 27-01-2006, 01:16 ]
dopisz na koniec:

Mark is a very handsome man with a big house and luxury car. He likes blondies, who are into opera and horror films. Also, they should be modest, loyal, carring and aren't materialistic.

[ Dodano: 27-01-2006, 01:17 ]
to daje 139 wyrazów, trzeba jeszcze cos dopisac, myśle dalej

[ Dodano: 27-01-2006, 01:23 ]


When Mark K. was a child he was very shy, but now when he won 10 million dollars, he is looking for a wife. He never had a girlfriend ,but now he wants to get married, so Mark placed an advertisement for a marriage partner in our newspaper. He doesn't know what he has to do when he makes a date with a girl ,nobody say(?) about getting married. Mark is a very nice ,but inexperienced man, so he asked our newspaper for help. Well ,if some nice free woman is now reading this announcement and she is looking for a man ,Mark shall willingly make a date. Mark is a very handsome man with a big house and a luxury car. He has got short blond hair, blue eyes, he is quite tall, muscled and well-built. He likes blondies, who are into opera and horror films. Also, they should be modest, loyal, carring and aren't materialistic.


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[whatever]

tomek twoja gramatyka tez powinna sie nieco poprawic, bo sa bledy

[70m3k]

tomek twoja gramatyka tez powinna sie nieco poprawic

nikt nie jest nieomylny.... dobrze by bylo gdybys wskazal te bledy :D

[whatever]

nie mam sily o tej porze, wlasnie wrocilem z piwka. brakuje pare "is" i "a"
zreszta pepek juz poszedl :P

[70m3k]

ok, przyznaje sie do jednego "is" i dwóch "a" :D poprawione :)

[whatever]

say powinnno byc chyba told him
niestety dawno niemialem do czynienia z angielskim

[70m3k]

He doesn't know what he has to do when he makes a date with a girl ,nobody say(?) about getting married


tutaj chodzi o to ze "co dopiero mówić o małżeństwie". nie mialem pojecia jak to napisac, ale to "nobody say" jest chyba źle...

[Karla]

When Mark K. was a child he was very shy, but now when he has won 10 million dollars everything has changed. He is looking for a wife! He never had a girlfriend ,but now he wants to get married. Mark conceived the idea of placing an advertisement for a marriage partner in our newspaper.

He doesn't know what he has to do while going out with the girl. Nobody told him what is the easiest way of falling in love with somebody and convincing proud lady to get married. According to the fact that he's very inexperienced he asked our newspaper for help.

If you're kind, free and attractive woman we're simply looking for you! Don't you wanna lead luxurious live by handsome, well- built, tall man with a big house and heavy wallet? Our mr. precious has got short, blond hair and blue eyes which you can immerse in.

He likes blondies, who are into opera and horror films. What is more, they should be modest, loyal, carring and not materialistic.


Powinno byc dobrze, ale czy moze ktos sprawdzic??

[Simmek]

Moj inglish jest perfekt, ale mi sie nie chce :)

[DZIADZIA]

Moj inglish jest perfekt, ale mi sie nie chce :)To smo ze mną, ale jakby mi się chciało tobym zrobił, więc licze na pomógł :D

[Lisu]

When Mark K. was a child he was very shy, but now, when he has won 10 million dollars everything has changed. He is looking for a wife! He never had a girlfriend ,but now he wants to get married. Mark conceived the idea of placing an advertisement for a marriage partner in our newspaper.

He doesn't know what he has to do while going out with the girl. Nobody told him what is the easiest way of falling in love with somebody and convincing proud lady to get married. According to the fact that he's very inexperienced he asked our newspaper for help.

If you're kind, free and attractive woman we're simply looking for you! Don't you want to lead luxurious live by handsome, well- built, tall man with a big house and heavy wallet? Our mr. precious has got short, blond hair and blue eyes which you can immerse in.

He likes blondies, who are into opera and horror films. What is more, they should be modest, loyal, carring and not materialistic.


nie wiem czy mozna uzywac zwrotow typu wanna w pracach do szkoly. to ogloszenie wiec nie wiem tam brakowalo jednego przecinka chyba...

[70m3k]

nie wiem czy mozna uzywac zwrotow typu wanna w pracach do szkoly. to ogloszenie wiec nie wiem tam brakowalo jednego przecinka chyba...
chyba można, zalezy od charakretu pracy, czy formal czy informal...

[pepek]

zreszta pepek juz poszedl :P


spoko powrocilem z pierwszym deszczem :p
tak btw to dzieki wszystkim :)

[Karla]

Moze byc?? Mam nadzieje, ze wszystko rozumiesz... nie uzywalam trudnych wyrazen :25:

P.s. nawet nie napiszesz czy ci sie podoba :(